Awesome descriptive recount Isabelle! You have used lots of detail to paint a picture in the readers mind! Remember when publishing to make sure the font is easy for the reader to read (size, colour ect).Miss Paynter
wOw I like it how you have used lots of deatail and I slso like how the background match the story
hi Izzy!!I love all of descriptive language it was very exciting. Next time yoy could make font bigger so it is not so hard to read. Great story!!!!!
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Awesome descriptive recount Isabelle! You have used lots of detail to paint a picture in the readers mind! Remember when publishing to make sure the font is easy for the reader to read (size, colour ect).
Miss Paynter
wOw I like it how you have used lots of deatail and I slso like how the background match the story
hi Izzy!!
I love all of descriptive language it was very exciting. Next time yoy could make font bigger so it is not so hard to read. Great story!!!!!
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